Neap whims
Sunrise,I see waves,so I sew a seafairer's mood;the see saweffect,Sunset tide.*Colour version:Sunrise,I see waves,so I sew a seafairer's mood;the see saweffect,Sunset.
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Ha! Neat! Almost makes me feel seasick! Not sure if it's the waves or the see-saw!lol'Love beauty, it is the shadow of God on the universe.'-Gabriela Mistral
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I saw a sewn sea fairer's moodreflecting coloured words on pageso thought in conversationthe poet I should encagefor though I've ponderedquite long and deapI can make head nor tailof "neap"!RG
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Thanks jean & RG,RG it's just a poem about mood, the neap tides. The moon influences the tides and is said to influence mood too (i.e tide of emotions) The words are a pun on seafarer (seafairer)...
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I'm not sure I understand the poem's content, but I do think the line arrangement very clever. Love the colored one, but then it doesn't take much to amuse me. LOL! Very unique!--Laurie
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Thanks a lot for the information, Matt, I love it when you explain your poems a bit!I love the coloured version, it makes the whole thing even cleverer, even more packed with meaning. GREAT! What a...
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